Messy room
Sophie had a frightful mission
Put her room in good condition
Shirts, socks, and underwear
Banana peels, a week old pear
Homework, pizza, melted chocolate
Stuffed inside her blue jean pocket
Now how did she attack this mess?
She buckled down and did her best
Sophie was frightful and Sophie was mean
But in the end, her room was clean
It shined, it sparkled like diamonds galore
Until she opened her closet door
Things came tumbling into the den
And poor, poor, Sophie had to start all over again
Written by: Sophie Chamberlain
All I can say is WOW!
ReplyDeleteThat was awesome! She should consider learning french and then come study poetry with Bob :)
ReplyDeleteWow. I am SO impressed. Way to go Sophie.
ReplyDeleteThat has to be homework and chores in one. I think she could definitely hand this in during the poetry unit in English class.
ReplyDeleteit would take me a year to write something like that.
ReplyDeletethat is awesome.
That was really good! I'm impressed!
ReplyDeleteI am so not shocked that it's shocking. The girl oozes talent.
ReplyDeleteWow, What a talent I couldn't do that in a lifetime. Very impressive.
ReplyDeletesophie,
ReplyDeletec.j. says: you will one day be a famous poet.
elis says: and i like your poem.
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